Do you see what I feel?

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Do You See What I Feel by Dana Harrell-Sanders

When I talked about you last night

it was just to write a verse.

It was fiction. No big deal! alright?

 

Why the constant striking

must there be so much throbbing

with such vengeance my way?

I was only kidding yesterday.

 

I didn’t mean anything by the poetry.

Please remove the heavy artillery!

Lower the mega equipment

Please take out the iron fists

that push, pound and torment,

beating incessantly

invoking indignation

imposing impatiently

seeking retribution

but for what?!

 

Have some compassion

let’s call it a truce

give me a meagre portion

of amnesty

please believe

I’ll never complain…

grant me some reprieve

to relieve this pain.

cease this unremitting beating

nonstop on this poor form of ail

it hurts just to breathe

I wince when I inhale

my plea is humble and pure

Please, please, JUST stop!

© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/02/10

11 thoughts on “Do you see what I feel?”

      1. well, all in hopes that the pain isnt too much one day! chronic pain is a trip to live with when jest a few years ago i had none and used to see an judge it in others , now i know how they felt..so what comes round goes round , always had it but didn’t know till one day well,,i found out..oh well , we each have our gig whatver that is, humbled i am now by mine take care , thanks cheryl 🙂

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