Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge #41, ”a fallen flower” by Moritake
This week’s Tan Renga Challenge is a beautiful haiku written by Arakida Moritake (1473-1549), a Japanese poet who also wrote haiku (in his time it was called haikai or hokku). This is a Dutch translation of a wonderful haiku written by Moritake.
a fallen flower
flew back to its perch
a butterfly
© Moritake
a fallen flower
flew back to its perch
a butterfly © Moritake
wings shining with dew’s presence
trying out its new freedom.
© Cheryl-Lynn
Submitted for: Carpe Diem tan renga Challenge /41
© Cheryl-Lynn 2014/06/28
Exceptional both.
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Wow! Thanks so much!
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Beautiful photo and words
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The photo is from Carpe Diem’s post but thanks for liking the tan renga:)
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huggles, hope your having a lovely weekend x
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I am having a restful weekend, thank you, Justine. x
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good, yay, huggles x
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What a marvelous completion!
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I had to read it again to see what I wrote…haha, we write so many don’t we? Thanks so much, Janice, I kinda like this one too:)
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