Climat d’automne (haiga)

© Clr '14 fleuve St-Laurent
© Clr ’14 fleuve St-Laurent

 

autumn gusts
shudder ripples
on the river

~

rafales d’automne
frémissent des risées
sur le fleuve

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© Clr ’14 November

seasonal rains
turn muddy paths into
frozen puddles

~
heading home last night
my cane slips on a patch,
leaves had turned to mulch

© Tournesol ’14

Carpe Diem Ghost Writer #33, Richard Wright on Autumn by Jen of Blog It Or Lose It

12 thoughts on “Climat d’automne (haiga)”

  1. Oh, very nice — I love the “shudder ripples” for reasons that belong underground (!!!) — gives it an extra layer of meaning. 🙂 And how treacherous — those newly icy paths — yikes! A lovely photo to go with it —

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