au revoir feuillage
repose bien verdure
accueillant l’hiver
l’arrivé du froid
le charme des glaçons bijoux
flocons émerveillent
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farewell foliage
rest well verdure
welcome winter
advent of cold
magic of icicle gems
snowflake enchantments
(c) Tournesol ’14
Oh my, this sparkles beautifully!
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Thanks you, icicles do that:)
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Don’t they though? And no batteries needed!
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and they’re free!
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Yippee–a bargain!
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Can only echo my previous comment!
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Your second stanza emits magical shines of gems! Great word craft Cheryl!
Hank
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Thank you so much for your kind words, glad you enjoyed this…it was difficult translating into English.
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c’est parfait!
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Merci ma chère!
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“farewell foliage”
There is both enigma and pathos in this simple line…
Exodus
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French is a much more poetic language. This is magically sculpted
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Thank you, like the wind sculpts the snow:)
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Lovely snow flake haiku…will think of you when surfing…Toodle pip !
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Now cut that out!!!
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Welcome welcome Winter morning!
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