Vicious assaults
rarely admonished
hushed cries
breath only despair
women and children
© Tournesol `14
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Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Well done–so heartbreaking.
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Usually in haiku we try to write nice things, but the prompt said to write about social issues…so there you have it. I was thinking mostly in the middle east and India
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I am from India. A mindset of violence, dominance and patriarchy is abound in many people throughout the world. Yes, there are places where instances that you refer to in your tanka take place relatively in larger numbers, but that doesn’t mean that only these places are plagued by such social issues. For instance, the countries with the most cases of child sexual abuse include countries such as UK and US as well.
Just thought of putting across my thoughts. Please do not mind.
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I don’t mind at all. I am a youth counsellor in Canada, so I do hear of atrocious abuse too often. When it comes to violence of this nature there is NO discrimination all over the world.
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Tragic.
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As women and children on this part of the hemisphere we are fortunate in so many ways.
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Saddening. The idea of humanity is shamed by such incidences of brutality. Powerful writing, Cheryl.
-HA
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Thank you…on my other blog at Traces I talk more blatantly about the dark side of humans all over the world because it must be talked about it until it stops.
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