near you (haiku)

breathing,
when I’m near you
quickens

when I’m near you
sun never sets
heart liquifies

quickens
my pulse and breathing
heavier.

© Tournesol ’14

Haiku Horizons “near”

7 thoughts on “near you (haiku)

  1. Wow. You wrote a very tiny,very hot micro-fiction romance novel from this prompt. I have to stop and pant in amazement when I stand too near my computer now. 😉 I love it.
    Alice

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