promised under the stars (haiga)

Blades cutting,
lovers embraced skate
under the stars

lovers embraced skate
searching for the full moon
behind the clouds

under the stars
lovers make promises
beneath the Milky Way

© Tournesol ’14

Carpe Diem

13 thoughts on “promised under the stars (haiga)

  1. Cheryl-Lynn, I love your star loving skating lovers looking for the moon. I can en-vision them skating right now. Very romantic, huh?

    I did find this morning an MSN news report of a “new” galaxy that was found near the Milky Way.
    The link is in my ‘Note 3’ under my Carpe Diem poem and pictures.


    • I am off to check this out, thank you so much. I’m pleased you enjoyed this poem. I was thinking of the river behind my grandmother’s house and the couple was my uncle and his gf…many moons ago, skating on the river.


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