life is messy (haiga)

At Carpe Diem Sparkling Stars, our inspirational haiku by Shiki:

when I looked back,
the man who passed
was lost in the mist © Masaoka Shiki

wakeful moments
just mistaken reveries
rolling into days

day after day
lost in a sea of fog
life is messy

old woman
chips away at what was home
lost in whiteout

© Tournesol `15

TABLET - WIN_20131215_095140 whiteout

9 thoughts on “life is messy (haiga)”

  1. Wow, that last picture with the words put within the frame of the picture itself. That was powerful. I probably wouldn’t have noticed the image in the waaaay back if those words weren’t there. They made me look again.

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