sweetness lost (haiku) 2015-01-252015-01-25 / Tournesol children are roses soft scent of sweetness adults lose fragrance © Tournesol’15 Share this:FacebookTwitterTumblrPinterestRedditPrintEmailLinkedInLike Loading... Related
Thanks, I rewrote the last line a few times: 1) then they grow up 2) adults stink 3) adults lose realness LikeLike Reply
So true! So simple…
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Alas a truth…
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Ha, ha! Brilliant! 😀
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Thanks, I rewrote the last line a few times:
1) then they grow up
2) adults stink
3) adults lose realness
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