Haiku

sweetness lost (haiku)

2015-01-25 Tournesol 4 Comments

children are roses

soft scent of sweetness

adults lose fragrance

© Tournesol’15

4 thoughts on “sweetness lost (haiku)”

yeseventhistoowillpass says:

2015-01-25 at 5:30 am

So true! So simple…

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Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:

2015-01-25 at 7:23 am

Alas a truth…

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Vashti Quiroz-Vega says:

2015-01-26 at 9:18 pm

Ha, ha! Brilliant! 😀

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1. Cheryl-Lynn says:
  
  2015-01-27 at 1:04 am
  
  Thanks, I rewrote the last line a few times:
  1) then they grow up
  2) adults stink
  3) adults lose realness
  
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