Hu, Jennifer (2014-10-30). The Flow of Peace: 40 Haiku inspired by Zen practice (October 2014) (Kindle Locations 18-19). . Kindle Edition.
Out my window
even the sky
will end. . .
© Jennifer Hu (The flow of Peace)
I’ve tried to create a troiku with Hu’s haiku:
Out my window
even the sky
will end. . .
© Jennifer Hu
out my window
a robin preys
fledglings chirp
even the sky
has its limits,
weeps
will end…
for a season – only,
weep not
© Tournesol’15
Lovely assembly of words and images, Cheryl, marching to an upbeat end…
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Yes, it’s nice to end on a positive note…or reassuring. Thank you so much, Raj.
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yet another step toward perfection in this form!
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Thanks, Janice, I found this was a lovely form to interpret the haiku.
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