angelic vibrations (troiku)

I was inspired after reading Magical Mystical Teacher in “Door”.  When I saw that photo, my heart was drawn to it since I love doors and my mind wandered to a place a few years ago attending a recital in an old church where this amazing musician allowed her fingers to float over her harp like an angel of grace.  And so I used MMT’s last haiku as the Troika which is the sleigh, the base haiku from which I am starting to write this troiku

Noxious vapours flee
at the sound of harp and lyre—
the old door trembles

© 2015 by Magical Mystical Teacher

noxious vapours flee
each new breath
heavenly sighs

at the sound of harp and lyre –
celestial visions
pull my heart strings

the old door trembles
coughing exaltation
 I shudder

© Tournesol ’15

Carpe Diem Haiku Kai “Harp”

10 thoughts on “angelic vibrations (troiku)”

  1. I really like what you’ve done here, Cheryl-Lynn: pulling my poem apart and putting it back together again with different glue! I especially like the cough you gave to the trembling door. 🙂

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      1. I took one of the street lamp tonight at our grocery store…different angle this time…gosh it gets dark so early now:( and we have not even set back the clocks yet!

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