the end is near
oh! that hanging cradle –
cobweb
the end is near
live today – like,
no tomorrows
oh! that hanging cradle
gently rocks,
to a heartbeat
cobweb
holding the mind
hostage
© Tournesol ’15
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Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Love what you’ve done here … very effective!
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Thanks, cara, there are so many images and meanings with that word “cobweb”.
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Yes, but I can’t forget that, though often beautiful and alluring, they are death traps 😉
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Well, yes, that is true…but the spider keeps my home free of bugs
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Exactly! 😉
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I try to convince my grandson of this so he won’t be so scared of spiders but it’s still not working.
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Actually, I’m not over fond of the beasties myself, but we wont tell him that 😉
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Yes, well I do prefer them outside my door rather than inside too!
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I have to agree … in Africa instead of keeping spiders in my house I had a couple of gekko .. cute little blighters – I think they ate spiders and flies and mosquitoes! 😉
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Well now that sounds like better than a fair trade!
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And they are very discreet too 😉
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You must write a story or Choka about this some day, if you have not already…if so, reblog it please!
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Now that is an idea … I’m in a bit of a slump right now so that could be stimulating!
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Voilà…I await with anticipation 😉
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Ohi-Boh! Now I’m in for it … but I’ll happily see what i can come up with!
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No pressure, cara, just something to think about on those days you are thinking, “now what could I write about?” 😉
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LOL – The idea is there now … and I hope to do something about it soon … or it’ll haunt me! 😀
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Absolutely wonderful poetry here. Soul searching and sparkling with beauty.
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Thank you so much. I find my haiku have changed a lot since my retreat last summer…for the better:)
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These are stunning in themsleves! 🙂
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Thanks, Celestine, I am finding writing a Troiku, many times, is like a special journey.
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Cheryl Lynn … awesome troiku.
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Thank you, Kristjaan. I am getting lots of feedback for newbies who are liking this new form as well …thank you for creating it.
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