ce doux baiser
aile de papillon soyeuse
joue effleurer
that gentle kiss
butterfly’s silken wings
brushed his cheek
© Tournesol ’15
Carpe Diem Writing Techniques: metaphor
ce doux baiser
aile de papillon soyeuse
joue effleurer
that gentle kiss
butterfly’s silken wings
brushed his cheek
© Tournesol ’15
Carpe Diem Writing Techniques: metaphor
how lovely 🙂
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Thanks, Suzanne. Hope you are taking good care of yourself.
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Just beautiful…
Les mots sont exquis en francais
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Merci, c’est vraie que c’est, après tout, la langue des amoureux 😉
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Beautiful, love that it’s bilingual. Makes me wish I still remembered more than a smattering of my college French.
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I have always spoken it but never went to French school, and wish I could write it better. When I write it in French first, it’s the original thought I had in that language. And, thanks so much for your kind words.
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You’re welcome!
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A delicate touch…
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very delicate
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Ow, lovely! 🙂
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Thanks, Celestine:)
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WOW … a fragile beauty with (in my opinion) a very nice and strong metaphor.
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I do love metaphors:)
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