(Hokku)
at the seashore
wind of summer through my hair
the shortest night
© Chèvrefeuille
whistling love’s refrain
lovers by the sea
barefoot interlude
under strawberry moon
wanting lips
rhythm of rolling waves
lovers’ serenade
promising
undying love
whispered all night long
gulls rudely interrupt
mock untried liaisons
eyes look down,
tender – your lips
upon blushed cheeks
(Ageku)
moonbeams on golden locks
shine midsummer’s dream
© Tournesol ’16/01/09
Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Wow! Wonderful, really!
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Thanks, Sky, it was a fun write.
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gulls rudely interrupt
mock untried liaisons
There’ll be some adverse conditions that come in between when things are turning out to be nice and well. That’s normally the case even when in a peaceful soliloquy. Wonderful write Cheryl!
Hank
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Thanks so much, Hank. Glad you enjoyed those darn rude gulls 😉
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Each one of these are gorgeous! Together they are a dream and a feast for the senses! I want to step into them and claim the dream for myself!
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What a lovely compliment that you were able to truly live the dream I wrote:)
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You’re welcome! It’s true! It’s so vividly rendered…
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😀
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So romantic. Even the gulls interrupting adds to the whole thing!
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Thanks, Carol:)
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You’re welcome!
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A splendidly romantic evening .. I enjoy each nuance, each moment … even those silly gulls!
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haha, yes, well the silly gulls could be a metaphor…my grandmaman intruding on our making out! 😉
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