icicles melt
tears of mistreated children
searching sun’s glow
listening with compassion
pillars shimmer promise
©Tournesol ’16/02/21
Compassion heals (haiga)
icicles melt
tears of mistreated children
searching sun’s glow
listening with compassion
pillars shimmer promise
©Tournesol ’16/02/21
Your haiga eeally touched me. It is so heart felt.
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Thanks so much Suzanne! I took that photo on my way to work last week
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A beautiful haiga Cheryl Lynn, it’s also known as tank-art (tanka + image); very nice tanka.
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I did not know htat…tank art, I like that. I would like to figure out a word for Troiku with a narrative…I write many haibun but sometimes I am so inspired to develop my haiku, it ends up being a troiku. The last ones I have called it Tale & a Troiku. Any thoughts on that, Kristjaan?
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