daisies on her wall (troiku)

stripped naked
piercing look of pure hatred
obeys evil whims

stripped naked
dives into her tapestry
of wild daisies

piercing look of pure hatred
swallows her

obeys evil whims
in a field of daisies,
her soul escapes

© Tournesol’16/03/02

Written for Three Word Wednesday: Naked, Obey, Piercing

17 thoughts on “daisies on her wall (troiku)

    • Yes, it is sad. Thanks for dropping by.I wonder how many go around hiding behind personas they wear as their masks to unveil something so foreign when they are alone.


  1. Such an interesting poem – i love the play with the daisies and her soul – i was left wondering if it was good her soul escapes- I’m hoping i guessed right that it was

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