recalling summers (tan renga)

temple in the sky
the road opens
a slice of blue sea      (Ubugu)

heat dances above the horizon
childhood memories come to mind (Chèvrefeuille)

What a beautiful hokku!  Chèvrefeuille’s completion brings to mind fond memories of long ago. As a child she recalls lying on her back under the maple tree.

temple in the sky
the road opens
a slice of blue sea      (Ubugu)

under the maple tree
winged shells tickle her face  (Tournesol)

laying on her back
freshness on the cool grass
her summer bed

soft swirls on blue canvas
The Artist’s brush strokes

hum of the rowboat
midday reveries
gentle lullaby

sudden wakefulness
helicopter seeds

© Clr '16 rivière Yamaska
© Clr ’16 rivière Yamaska

©Tournesol’16/05/27

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