one single ripple (troibun)

We are to  use this beautiful haiku to inspire our writing…

lights along the shore
shimmering reflections
ripple in the lake
© Joyce Lorenson

She remembers telling her youths many times how grief is like a tidal wave at first with waves crashing on the shore with such a vengeance. Over time the waves roll in with restraint and eventually over time, intermittently until they roll in no longer. Eventually,  the water is clear like a mirror safe for a single ripple…

reminder
gentle ripple on the water
memories of long ago

reminder
times she held me close,
brings a smile

gentle ripple on the water
subtle, yet genuine
and surreal

memories of long ago
songs echo in my heart
even if off-key

©Tournesol`16/06/07

 

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9 thoughts on “one single ripple (troibun)

    1. Glad you enjoyed this…I wonder if there is a term or word for someone who does not know the words of a song and she sings it a split second after the singer pretending to know the song.

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    1. Thank you, Kristjaan. I wish I would have known to write this way when I was working with bereaved children. How simpler it would have been to just write a haiku.

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