Daily Moments July 7 2017 Heatwave (Troibun)

Her head is a bit foggy theses days with the  heatwave this week.  No matter how many hours of sleep, it still never seems to be enough. She thinks about her neighbours upstairs and wonders if they are finally resting after a month of fasting…Ramada is over, they too need to catch up on sleep.

(troiku)

heatwave
humid dense air
heavy breathing

heatwave
children squealing
splashing water

humid heavy air
piercing through
cicadas songs

heavy breathing
coolness of the night breeze
lovers play

© Tournesol’16-07-07

Daily Moments July 7 216 Heatwave Troibun

If you are interested in learning more on how to write a “troiku” check out Chèvrefeuille’s blog at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, who created this new form of haiku.

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