hidden verses (tan renga)

Here is a lovely haiku created by poetess, Pat R aka  JazzyTowers at Thoughts and Entanglements we are to complete this hokku in this Tan Renga Challenge at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

wisteria sways –
pendulous blossoms in breeze
unspoken promise (Pat R)

Our mentor/host completed a stunning renga for this Tan Renga challenge:

wisteria sways –
pendulous blossoms in breeze
unspoken promise (Pat R)

drinking tea on the veranda
the sweet perfume of blue rain (Chèvrefeuille)

Now I am going to attempt to complete this beautiful hokku:

wisteria sways –
pendulous blossoms in breeze
unspoken promise (Pat R)

safe for a soft whisper
drifting in the zephyr

only nature hears
implicit lyrics float
with a lilt

©Tournesol’16

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