early bird
stirring in her pre-dawn dreams
chirps by her window
stretching to bring to life
steady roar takes over
tweets carry on
white noise overlaps
rising with the sun
©Tournesol,16/10/31
Daily Moments in the wee hours of the night
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Tournesol dans un Jardin 
The chirping in better than a siren.
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This is true…;-)
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Merci beacoup Cheryl for the lovely morning thoughts and the images woven by your words. I would have loved to continue in French but limited by my smattering of the language. Ciao..
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Thank you for your lovely comment. I am pleased you enjoyed my poem:)
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I enjoyed your poem too. And it was interesting to see a form I haven’t seen before.
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thanks! usually a renga is when one person writes the haiku and another person writes the renga (the two lines) I have not done that lately. One poet and I would go back and forth several stanzas. Sometimes instead of commenting on a haiku, I may respond with a renga if I am inspired.
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