promise (troiku)

remembering
tackling disappointments
empty promises

remembering
daydreaming
my refuge

tackling disappointments
crushing spirits
but, for a moment

empty promises
silenced
lost in the wind

©Tournesol’16/12/27

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai – Promises inspired by the music

Troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe diem Haiku Kai

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9 thoughts on “promise (troiku)

    1. Thank you! I think the key is also, when it is lost in the wind it is also time to let go of that disappointment. I think I may write something about that…it fits in perfectly with starting 2017. Blessings x

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