promise (troiku)

tackling disappointments
empty promises

my refuge

tackling disappointments
crushing spirits
but, for a moment

empty promises
lost in the wind


Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai – Promises inspired by the music

Troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe diem Haiku Kai

9 thoughts on “promise (troiku)”

    1. Thank you! I think the key is also, when it is lost in the wind it is also time to let go of that disappointment. I think I may write something about that…it fits in perfectly with starting 2017. Blessings x


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