I think I`ll reblog this since it gives hope that spring will come…some day [sighs]
Such a lovely spring day to be in a park. An old couple sit on a park bench. The man leans on his cane, watching his life partner talk to the birds. Gnarled fingers toss seeds to the pigeons, then places a plastic bowl filled with seeds under the bench where grateful sparrows wait.
cycling by the park
boy holding tight,
kite on a string
cycling by the park
child hangs on the monkey bar
squeak of swings
boy holding tight,
hand on her swollen belly
teeter-totter moans
kite on a string
dancing on blue canvas
how the wind sings!
© Tournesol ’16-05-15
(100 words)
Written for Heeding Haiku for Chèvrefeuille at MindLoveMiserysMenagerie.
We are asked to write a haibun of 100 words with the theme the circle of life. I chose to include a troiku making my narrative and haiku a troibun. To see what a troiku is, check…
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I hope the weather warms up for you soon. I like your description of the park. I could visualize all the activities you write of.
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Thanks so much, Suzanne. It was when someone commented on this today that I had a chance to reread it. This is definitely one I would add in a publication [heck, even I liked it!] 🙂 We just had a snow storm of 35 to 75 cm in various parts of Southern Quebec…today was the first day I could walk on some sidewalks.
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So very well done!
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Aw, I knew you would appreciate this one, Janice…bird seeker and bird lover that you are:)
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Beautiful piece
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Thank you 🙂
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