Performance in the sky (haiku)

© Clr ’14

crimson skies wane
sparrows’ songs slowly fade
casting shadows

casting shadows
nature waits in mute patience
dancing of the stars


Inspired by Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

8 thoughts on “Performance in the sky (haiku)

    • Thanks so much, Hamish. I originally wrote the haiku with the last line including the performance of the stars but I had not saved it at work and recreated it, first as a tanka , then 2 haiku. I am satisfied with the first one as well.


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