© Clr ’14
crimson skies wane
sparrows’ songs slowly fade
casting shadows
casting shadows
nature waits in mute patience
dancing of the stars
©Tournesol’17/03/24
Inspired by Carpe Diem Haiku Kai
Performance in the sky (haiku)
Tournesol dans un Jardin
Poetry ~ Waka
Tournesol dans un Jardin 
That’s lovely – the last line is particularly evocative.
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Thank you so much…I think I changed it a few times. I wrote the first part last night and NEVER saved it, so I started over with the idea at my break at work.
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Sometimes the best haiku come like that – there’s some work behind the scenes, then later on, a haiku emerges relatively easily.
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The operative word here is “relatively” [chuckles!]
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Very nice – the first haiku is a masterpiece. Truly
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Thanks so much, Hamish. I originally wrote the haiku with the last line including the performance of the stars but I had not saved it at work and recreated it, first as a tanka , then 2 haiku. I am satisfied with the first one as well.
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Beautiful!
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Thanks so much , Janice.
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