©Clr”17
dandelion dandelion
on the sandy beach
spring opens its eyes © Ogiwara Seisensui
children building sandcastles
seagulls sing off key © Tournesol’17
dandelion dandelion (Ogiwara Seisensui) Tan Renga
Tournesol dans un Jardin
Poetry ~ Waka
©Clr”17
dandelion dandelion
on the sandy beach
spring opens its eyes © Ogiwara Seisensui
children building sandcastles
seagulls sing off key © Tournesol’17
Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Awesome your stanza has made the scene even more beautiful and complete.
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There are so many childhood memories of dandelions. Thank you for your beautiful comment.
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Off key gulls, I like that line!
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Haha. It’s the nicest way to describe their voices.
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Luv the inclusion of the seagulls
Much love…
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Thanks so much, Gillena 🙂
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Thanks so much for your visits today, Gillena:)
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Makes me smile.
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Dandelions can do that…bring us back to our childhood. Placing it under our chins to see if we like butter 🙂
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seagulls sing off key
They often seem to do that with their squawks!
Hank
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Yes, they do have an annoying sound sometimes.
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