last splashof pink
slips below the horizon
enter twilight
last splash of pink
blending with a darkened sky
colour it purple
slip below the horizon
other side of the world
meeting dawn
enter twilight
dusk turning
to midnight blue
©Tournesol ’17/11/01
A troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chevrefeuille at CarpeDiemHaiku Kai.
other side of the world/meeting dawn/…. a tranquil troiku. Am writing micropoetry all this month at thotpurge.wordpress.com Do visit and share a poem or two if you can! 🙂 https://thotpurge.wordpress.com/2017/11/01/micropoetry-month-nov-2017-1/
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I would love to…thank you! Actually this troiku is perfect for your first prompt. 🙂
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It definitely is.. and am glad you shared a troiku.. love the form!! Thanks and stay tuned all this month!
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I will try my best. writing has been a challenge lately when life happens
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Wonderful, as always. 🙂
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Thanks so much, Celestine
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I love the pink of the setting sun… and the reminder that all is connected. Great!
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thank you. I try to imagine the sun rising in Australia
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This is lovely.
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Thank you for your kind words
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A gorgeous troiku Cheryl Lynn. You have mastered this creative way of haiku-ing in great way. Thank you for being an ambassador of troiku.
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must agree with Chevrefeuille.
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Thanks so much, Janice. I am so pleased I can do justice to Chèvrefeuille’s creation
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Very nice Troiku! I love it when they are written almost like a story. Very beautiful scenes evoked.
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Thank so much! What I love so much about the troiku is when I start off with a haiku, I realize I still have so much to say about that first thought (haiku). I’m so glad Chevrefeuille created this form a few years ago!
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