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edging season tanka Daily Moments November 17

2017-11-18 Tournesol 6 Comments

© Clr’15

passing slowly
filled with melancholy
time
caught in a whirlwind
unspoken words

©Tournesol’17/11/17

Written for MicroPoetry Month #17

6 thoughts on “edging season tanka Daily Moments November 17”

janicead says:

2017-11-18 at 11:19 pm

Fall is the time for melancholy feelings.

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1. Tournesol says:
  
  2017-11-19 at 6:07 am
  
  November 15th to the end of autumn is tough.
  
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thotpurge says:

2017-11-19 at 2:47 am

Like the contrariness there.. whirlwind in the slow passage of time! Thanks for sharing!!

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1. Tournesol says:
  
  2017-11-19 at 6:10 am
  
  Thanks, Rajani.
  
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forestbather says:

2017-11-19 at 8:05 am

Absolutely beautiful. Stunning, vraiment.

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1. Tournesol says:
  
  2017-11-19 at 9:55 pm
  
  Merci bien, Hamish, that means a lot 🙂
  
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