song of a skylark
echoes from heaven’s meadow
wind in my hair
song of a skylark
even robins stop to listen
sweetens the air
echoes from heaven’s meadow
imagine her lip-singing
mes chères mamans
wind in my hair
one dove in-flight, startles me
heart skips a beat
© Tournesol ‘19/04/16
This TROIKU is a new form of haiku created by my mentor, Chèvrefeuilles at CDHK
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.com
French translation of Dove is Colombe which is my late mother’s name
Written to the prompt on my mentor Chèvrefeuille at CDHK Carpe Diem #1648 skylark (hibari)
I love the rhyme in the last lines of the first two haiku, Cheryl-Lynn – was that intentional? Birds singing and on the wing make my heart skip a beat – wonderful creatures!
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No it was not intentional at all! I was going to change it since haiku are not supposed to rhyme but the word just fit.
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good contrast in the second poem. thank you for sharing them.
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Thanks so much for your kind words 🙂
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What a wonderful Troiku you have created with the haiku I gave. You make me blush with your kind words Cheryl Lynn. I am glad to see you again at CDHK.
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You reap what you sow , Kristjaan x
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