Departure #28 night traveller (Troibun)
(troiku)
traveling all night
pleasant leisure distractions
eyes flutter
travelling all night
so many strange places
yet, familiar
pleasant leisure distractions
finally worries
take a backseat
eyes flutter
taking in every scene
my movie screen
Such an offensive shrill pulls me aggressively from my dream. Keeping my eyes closed trying with all my might, to slip back on that journey. I put on my eye mask filling my eyes with darkness…hoping, waiting for the train to pass.
©Tournesol’17/08/16
A troiku is a new form of haiku created by Chevrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai and this troibun was written for Carpe Diem’s August Retreat 2017 and the theme is “Departure”
Departure #29 last embrace (tanka)
sun rising
in its splendour
blossoms
dusk hastens light of day
nighttime’s last embrace
(c) Tournesol’17
Departure #30
necessary endings (haibun)
Endings can be so difficult. No one wants to say goodbye to frolicking in an open field, making sand castles on a sunny beach or walking along a park in open sandals. One just feels so much lighter! It tastes like freedom. Moreover, despite the rich blankets of gold and amber, it is so darn hard to let go of this period. Just like the child that says, “Just five more minutes, please!” so he can say up a little bit later, resisting the end of a day.
carefree summer
soon comes to an end
sombreness lingers
less time to play
shorter days
walking home alone
path filled with fallen leaves
winter’s calling me
© Tournesol ’17
At Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, Chévrefeuille has created an Autum Retreat from July 15th to August 15th…30 days – theme is departure These are my last three entries.
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