Just before dawn
life seems to be on pause -still,
the north star shines bright
just before dawn
restless fledglings peep
mother eyes the worm
life seems to be on pause – still,
with bated breath –
baby’s first step
the north star shines bright
both on sea and land,
earth’s guiding light
©Tournesol’17
Tournesol dans un Jardin 
Beautiful.
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Thanks so much!
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Nicely done!
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Thanks so much!
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O so enchanting ! You got a flowing pen …!!!!
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Thank you, Milan. Actually I wrote this just before sunrise. I had a sleepless night due to the heat. After tossing and turning, I decided to write.
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That’s when inspiration fairy came ….!
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Oh, I thought she had something something a little different than my muse 😉
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this troiku seems like a smooth flow. i would love to attempt troiku
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Oh please do have a go at it. I have grown to love this form so much. It was created by Chèvrefeuille at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai who posts a meme every day and he is also our mentor in waka writing as well opens our eyes to the world of nature and spirituality. http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.ca/p/troiku-new-form-of-haiku.html
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The first one is my favorite:)
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Thanks, the place where it all started…I was going to leave it at one haiku but then my mind would not shut up )
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LoL!! I know how that can be:)
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