that innocent look,
puppy dog eyes luring
victims of his charm
that innocent look
they fall prey
his deceptive charm
puppy dog eyes wait
charm them in parks and beaches
false look of kindness
victims of his charm
sobbing victims betrayed,
look of pretense
© Tournesol ’15
This week, we are to do opposite meanings in our two formed sentences. RonavanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge “Charm & Look”
This is dark.
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Yeah, I was going for a player of a guy and it turned out into this. Guess my work slipped in.
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Great Post
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Thanks so much!
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welcome
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Something is lurking.Mmm..
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Exactly, stranger danger!
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Oh wow I didn’t see that twist coming. Well done!
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Thanks, Melinda, it turned out differently than I had anticipated but sometimes the subconcious takes over.
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You’re welcome. Don’t you love when that happens?
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Yes. I usually write stuff like this on my other blog though as it is quite dark.
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Oh but you do light so beautifully 🙂
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🙂 “sticks out chest proudly”
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You should be proud! 🙂
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